Peer Review

Overall my peer review was extremely helpful. The main issue with my paper was that it was a little dry and boring. However, my partner was Jenna and we know from her dinner blog post that she can make writing sound more interesting than it actually is. She showed me where I should add some more description and details to make the reader seem like he/she was there. I took all of her advise and my paper is much more lively now! She also help me with a few awkward sentences and giving suggestions on how to rewrite it rather than just saying to change it. I was also glad to see that she understood the point of my story by reading. I was not sure if an outside reader would pick it up at first. I feel much more confident in my paper after Wednesday's peer review.